Post by Daniel Winsett on Oct 15, 2009 21:07:06 GMT -6
I normally don't play villains, but Homunculi sound fun
Basic Information
Name: Wrath (made from Daniel Winsett's remains)
Gender: Male
Age: twenty-five (appears twenty-five)
Physical: With a strong build of around 5'11'' (2 meters) and weighing at 205 lbs (82 kg), Daniel, as he often introduces himself as (AKA Wrath), can strike an imposing image. Mostly though, he just smiles. he has dark brown eyes, and he comes off as friendly, calm, and a little goofy sometimes. He has short brown hair brushed back, and a closely trimmed goatee/beard which surrounds his mouth. He favors blue jeans, a dark grey/green/brown t-shirt, and over all a cream/offwhite sports jacket. He tends to wear durable footwear, like hiking boots, and he never goes anywhere without his dark brown fedora, which he insistently calls his "Country Gentleman Hat". (If you need a reference for the hat, go watch any Indiana Jones movie. ;D) The mark of the Ouroboros can be found on his left shoulder, barely concealed by the sleeve of a t-shirt.
Personality: Wrath enjoys having a nice, easy going time. He's friendly and enjoys mixing with people. He blends in fairly easily with your average crowd. Unfortunately, for those people around him, he can also be very willful, and often holds grudges. Once his wrath is kindled, he becomes brash and arrogant. Though he isn't devoid of all mercy, it's typically only shown when he is feeling lazy or thinks he can get a benefit out of it. Sometimes, when memories of his past surface, he doesn't feel like violence. His anger doesn't always burn hot. Depending on the situation, and his mood, it could be as cold as the peaks of the Drachma Mountains. Ultimately, it is difficult to predict what he will do when, as this depends on whether he is being cold and calculating, or is a furious burning brand.
History(opt): Wraths origins are actually from outside of Amestris. Daniel Winsett, a skilled captain in the the Amestrian Military was stationed as a western border guard. In one of the small but frequent raids from the neighboring Creta, he was abducted and taken to a holding facility where Alchemists were being used by certain members of the Cretan government.
The plans never really went anywhere. The people there eventually dispersed, but not before attempting to create a being who they could slip back into the Amestrian Military. Winsett was killed in the process, and the Cretans lost some of their best scientists in the backlash of the procedure. What was produced was the Homunculus, Wrath. At some later time, the body of the Daniel Winsett was returned to the Amestrian State as part of a bargain. He was laid to rest in a graveyard at the Western HQ.
Perhaps the loss of their alchemists was what allowed the others to slip away. One alchemist, Jeorge Cordeg, took pity on Wrath, the creature he had helped create. He also managed to slip away much like a Dr. Marco from his government with a prototype they had been working on, A philosopher's Stone.
He lived in peace for years , having moved north, into the mountains that bordered Drachma. He raised Wrath as any other human being, and the Wrath took form with a relatively normal life, if secluded.
The Homunculus grew at the same rate as that of a normal human. He became incredibly quick, and grew into his inhuman-strength quite young. He often would hike through the mountains with his adopted father. Sometimes he injured himself, but these injuries closed up nearly instantaneously. By the time he was ten, Jeorge was beginning to explain that Daniel was different. Three more years passed, and Jeorge was helping the creature to come to terms with his existence. Paradise ended.
One of the corrupt officials of the government, the same one as before hadn't given up the chase for their Doctor, or the stone he smuggled away. Jeorge was expendable; they had other alchemists. He was executed after they extracted the hiding place of the stone. Daniel/Wrath was heartbroken while holding the body of his father the same soldier shot this "boy" down as well.
Then, an unthinkable thing happened. Daniel got back up but something was different about him. His eyes were fierce; his body shook with rage. His wrath was kindled.
The soldiers there were commanded by an alchemist, a lapdog of the corrupt officials, and through continued pain and beatings they were able to break his will to keep fighting. He was taken back to the new facility, a prize nearly as valuable as the stone. For the next two years he was subjected to experiments and pain. The memories of his home, held so dear, became distant things, nearly stripped away by the pain. The Army decided that they could use the stone they had taken, and merge it with the "Test Subject". This was an attempt to create a super soldier that they could send out to the battlefield. The same Philosopher's Stone they had taken from Jeorge Cordeg resulted in Daniel's freedom, but also the creation of Wrath.
As the Stone was fed into him, intravenously, His Wrath was kindled once more. Wrath broke away from his bondings and started venting his fury on the people around him. The people there weren't expecting a fight after he had been despondent for so long. He discovered he had abilities that let him move through rock type minerals. He escaped from the place. It is unlikely anything else will be done there. Before he left, he hooked the overseer up to some of the same equipment Wrath had been attached too. Regrettably for him, the pain from the machines was too great for a human to withstand. He expired shortly after it began.
Ten years passed. It is present time. Two years after Eckhart came through the portal between worlds. Daniel heard rumors in the east, from Amestris, over the years. Strange happenings were going on. He ignored them. Preferring instead to stay hidden. At last though, he decided to to travel into Amestris.
Though he has recovered somewhat from his treatment in the past, He has been changed, perhaps irrevocably. Raised by a kind man who accepted him, he still hopes for a normal life, but few are as understanding as Jeorge Cordeg.
Abilities
Specialty: An understanding of the workings of alchemy.
Inhuman strength, speed, and reflexes.
Body regenerates from injuries.
Can move through Rock, Dirt and other mineral elements at incredible speeds. (As long as the area involved can be seen. Also limited in distance this is stated mostly to reassure the staff members though he can travel fast, there will be no instantaneous warping from the bottom to the top of a mountain. Wrath can move about as fast through the earth as he can above the earth.)
Humunculi
Relation to Alchemist: Father figure. See history.
Notes:Wow, this went longer than I thought it would. I feel like I could write a mini novel after that! You'll see I left plenty of wiggle room for cannon issues, since the shows don't say much about the other countries.
Some of you might not agree with the Psycological profile of this Homunculus. I say that it was Dante leading the sins to do some of what they did though. Don't worry, He'll be bad enough in his own way, so you'll get your villain...
If this is accepted, I should post a summary of his story. That way, people to lazy to read through six-thousand letters can go there and read the basic form...
Edit: Slight edits in physical, personality, and history. Mostly just to make a few things clearer... and add my favorite hat in!
Removal of one special ability because it resembled alchemy too much.
And yet another edit: Consisiting of the fact that the character, depending on his mood, may give his name as Daniel Wrath, Daniel Winsett, or just Wrath.
Basic Information
Name: Wrath (made from Daniel Winsett's remains)
Gender: Male
Age: twenty-five (appears twenty-five)
Physical: With a strong build of around 5'11'' (2 meters) and weighing at 205 lbs (82 kg), Daniel, as he often introduces himself as (AKA Wrath), can strike an imposing image. Mostly though, he just smiles. he has dark brown eyes, and he comes off as friendly, calm, and a little goofy sometimes. He has short brown hair brushed back, and a closely trimmed goatee/beard which surrounds his mouth. He favors blue jeans, a dark grey/green/brown t-shirt, and over all a cream/offwhite sports jacket. He tends to wear durable footwear, like hiking boots, and he never goes anywhere without his dark brown fedora, which he insistently calls his "Country Gentleman Hat". (If you need a reference for the hat, go watch any Indiana Jones movie. ;D) The mark of the Ouroboros can be found on his left shoulder, barely concealed by the sleeve of a t-shirt.
Personality: Wrath enjoys having a nice, easy going time. He's friendly and enjoys mixing with people. He blends in fairly easily with your average crowd. Unfortunately, for those people around him, he can also be very willful, and often holds grudges. Once his wrath is kindled, he becomes brash and arrogant. Though he isn't devoid of all mercy, it's typically only shown when he is feeling lazy or thinks he can get a benefit out of it. Sometimes, when memories of his past surface, he doesn't feel like violence. His anger doesn't always burn hot. Depending on the situation, and his mood, it could be as cold as the peaks of the Drachma Mountains. Ultimately, it is difficult to predict what he will do when, as this depends on whether he is being cold and calculating, or is a furious burning brand.
History(opt): Wraths origins are actually from outside of Amestris. Daniel Winsett, a skilled captain in the the Amestrian Military was stationed as a western border guard. In one of the small but frequent raids from the neighboring Creta, he was abducted and taken to a holding facility where Alchemists were being used by certain members of the Cretan government.
The plans never really went anywhere. The people there eventually dispersed, but not before attempting to create a being who they could slip back into the Amestrian Military. Winsett was killed in the process, and the Cretans lost some of their best scientists in the backlash of the procedure. What was produced was the Homunculus, Wrath. At some later time, the body of the Daniel Winsett was returned to the Amestrian State as part of a bargain. He was laid to rest in a graveyard at the Western HQ.
Perhaps the loss of their alchemists was what allowed the others to slip away. One alchemist, Jeorge Cordeg, took pity on Wrath, the creature he had helped create. He also managed to slip away much like a Dr. Marco from his government with a prototype they had been working on, A philosopher's Stone.
He lived in peace for years , having moved north, into the mountains that bordered Drachma. He raised Wrath as any other human being, and the Wrath took form with a relatively normal life, if secluded.
The Homunculus grew at the same rate as that of a normal human. He became incredibly quick, and grew into his inhuman-strength quite young. He often would hike through the mountains with his adopted father. Sometimes he injured himself, but these injuries closed up nearly instantaneously. By the time he was ten, Jeorge was beginning to explain that Daniel was different. Three more years passed, and Jeorge was helping the creature to come to terms with his existence. Paradise ended.
One of the corrupt officials of the government, the same one as before hadn't given up the chase for their Doctor, or the stone he smuggled away. Jeorge was expendable; they had other alchemists. He was executed after they extracted the hiding place of the stone. Daniel/Wrath was heartbroken while holding the body of his father the same soldier shot this "boy" down as well.
Then, an unthinkable thing happened. Daniel got back up but something was different about him. His eyes were fierce; his body shook with rage. His wrath was kindled.
The soldiers there were commanded by an alchemist, a lapdog of the corrupt officials, and through continued pain and beatings they were able to break his will to keep fighting. He was taken back to the new facility, a prize nearly as valuable as the stone. For the next two years he was subjected to experiments and pain. The memories of his home, held so dear, became distant things, nearly stripped away by the pain. The Army decided that they could use the stone they had taken, and merge it with the "Test Subject". This was an attempt to create a super soldier that they could send out to the battlefield. The same Philosopher's Stone they had taken from Jeorge Cordeg resulted in Daniel's freedom, but also the creation of Wrath.
As the Stone was fed into him, intravenously, His Wrath was kindled once more. Wrath broke away from his bondings and started venting his fury on the people around him. The people there weren't expecting a fight after he had been despondent for so long. He discovered he had abilities that let him move through rock type minerals. He escaped from the place. It is unlikely anything else will be done there. Before he left, he hooked the overseer up to some of the same equipment Wrath had been attached too. Regrettably for him, the pain from the machines was too great for a human to withstand. He expired shortly after it began.
Ten years passed. It is present time. Two years after Eckhart came through the portal between worlds. Daniel heard rumors in the east, from Amestris, over the years. Strange happenings were going on. He ignored them. Preferring instead to stay hidden. At last though, he decided to to travel into Amestris.
Though he has recovered somewhat from his treatment in the past, He has been changed, perhaps irrevocably. Raised by a kind man who accepted him, he still hopes for a normal life, but few are as understanding as Jeorge Cordeg.
Abilities
Specialty: An understanding of the workings of alchemy.
Inhuman strength, speed, and reflexes.
Body regenerates from injuries.
Can move through Rock, Dirt and other mineral elements at incredible speeds. (As long as the area involved can be seen. Also limited in distance this is stated mostly to reassure the staff members though he can travel fast, there will be no instantaneous warping from the bottom to the top of a mountain. Wrath can move about as fast through the earth as he can above the earth.)
Humunculi
Relation to Alchemist: Father figure. See history.
Notes:Wow, this went longer than I thought it would. I feel like I could write a mini novel after that! You'll see I left plenty of wiggle room for cannon issues, since the shows don't say much about the other countries.
Some of you might not agree with the Psycological profile of this Homunculus. I say that it was Dante leading the sins to do some of what they did though. Don't worry, He'll be bad enough in his own way, so you'll get your villain...
If this is accepted, I should post a summary of his story. That way, people to lazy to read through six-thousand letters can go there and read the basic form...
Edit: Slight edits in physical, personality, and history. Mostly just to make a few things clearer... and add my favorite hat in!
Removal of one special ability because it resembled alchemy too much.
And yet another edit: Consisiting of the fact that the character, depending on his mood, may give his name as Daniel Wrath, Daniel Winsett, or just Wrath.